I can recognize that Marble Garden from a mile away (underrated stage btw)
This one has the same problem "Retro Adventures" has, but it's a bit different. This time the percussion almost overtakes the growls in the drop. It could be personal preference, but it really bothers me that I feel off-beat of the actual melody 'cause of how heavy the drums come in and out.
I hope this helps.
I'm not all that good with critiquing as it is.